What is the greatest risk in a relationship?

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at 07:23 AM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(6 | Newbie) (m)
When all lights gone
the dreams have come
when the nights are quiet
and the days are done

when in your mind
you look around
in hope to find
the gentle sound

of her sweet voice
in the calming winds
with your own choice
you pick the one

you know you love
too hold her tight
with one to live
you think you might

ask her there
to be your wife
to love and care
through out your life

when you get down
to your one knee
the time is now
for you too be

but then what happens
is always the worst
you wake too have had
your heart that burst

because your love
was not really true
it was only a dream
and nothing for you.

DID YOU ENJOY THIS POEM?
ktalent at 09:32 AM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(934 | Upcoming) (f)
hmm poor dreamer.   Cool

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vivian07 at 10:18 AM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(16828 | Hero) (f)
@ vampire, what kind of yeye dream is dis ?
na mumy water u dey hold for dream abi ?
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onchedu at 10:23 AM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(7703 | Hero) (m)
lol @ Tha comments.
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esonu at 11:38 AM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(13438 | Hero) (m)
poster go and take malaria drugs lol

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around_d_corner at 11:51 AM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(8237 | Hero) (m)
Quote from: esonu on 11:38 AM, 16/07/2009
poster go and take malaria drugs lol
or beta  still he should go see his doc......
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esonu at 11:53 AM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(13438 | Hero) (m)
exactly

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mazi at 12:03 PM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(19677 | Hero) (m)
dis is more of hallucination than dream..
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around_d_corner at 12:09 PM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(8237 | Hero) (m)
Quote from: mazi on 12:03 PM, 16/07/2009
dis is more of hallucination than dream..
hahahahahaaa yeye............
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oyez at 12:25 PM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(1267 | Gistmaniac) (m)
Joseph the Rhymer

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around_d_corner at 01:44 PM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(8237 | Hero) (m)
passin and dreamin
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Beauti4 at 03:19 PM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(8184 | Hero) (f)
Vam....thank u bt i no enjoy am.
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MrDon at 03:23 PM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(4825 | Gistmaniac) (m)
black dream is when light is gone but then u re a vampire
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Beauti4 at 03:26 PM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(8184 | Hero) (f)
i think your dream makes some sense sha....
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esonu at 04:28 PM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(13438 | Hero) (m)
joseph de dreamer

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around_d_corner at 04:40 PM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(8237 | Hero) (m)
Quote from: Beauti4 on 03:26 PM, 16/07/2009
i think your dream makes some sense sha....
na lie no sense att all..........
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Beauti4 at 04:46 PM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(8184 | Hero) (f)
Quote from: around_d_corner on 04:40 PM, 16/07/2009
Quote from: Beauti4 on 03:26 PM, 16/07/2009
i think your dream makes some sense sha....
na lie no sense att all..........

write your own dream make i c
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around_d_corner at 05:18 PM, 16/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(8237 | Hero) (m)
Quote from: Beauti4 on 04:46 PM, 16/07/2009
Quote from: around_d_corner on 04:40 PM, 16/07/2009
Quote from: Beauti4 on 03:26 PM, 16/07/2009
i think your dream makes some sense sha....
na lie no sense att all..........

write your own dream make i c
to to ma profile comment and see them...... and ve wrote them to u 4mer
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blackberryPearl at 12:58 AM, 17/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(13788 | Hero) (f)
u guys are all mean.
he is just dreaming
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McBona at 04:46 AM, 17/07/2009 (9 years ago)
(4462 | Gistmaniac) (m)
Joseph!  But not son of Jacob
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