What is the greatest risk in a relationship?

Date: 16-07-2009 7:23 am (14 years ago) | Author: Onyehinyere Don Grant
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- at 16-07-2009 07:23 AM (14 years ago)
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When all lights gone
the dreams have come
when the nights are quiet
and the days are done

when in your mind
you look around
in hope to find
the gentle sound

of her sweet voice
in the calming winds
with your own choice
you pick the one

you know you love
too hold her tight
with one to live
you think you might

ask her there
to be your wife
to love and care
through out your life

when you get down
to your one knee
the time is now
for you too be

but then what happens
is always the worst
you wake too have had
your heart that burst

because your love
was not really true
it was only a dream
and nothing for you.

DID YOU ENJOY THIS POEM?

Posted: at 16-07-2009 07:23 AM (14 years ago) | Newbie
- ktalent at 16-07-2009 09:32 AM (14 years ago)
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hmm poor dreamer.   Cool

Posted: at 16-07-2009 09:32 AM (14 years ago) | Upcoming
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- vivian07 at 16-07-2009 10:18 AM (14 years ago)
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@ vampire, what kind of yeye dream is dis ?
na mumy water u dey hold for dream abi ?
Posted: at 16-07-2009 10:18 AM (14 years ago) | Hero
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- onchedu at 16-07-2009 10:23 AM (14 years ago)
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lol @ Tha comments.
Posted: at 16-07-2009 10:23 AM (14 years ago) | Hero
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- esonu at 16-07-2009 11:38 AM (14 years ago)
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poster go and take malaria drugs lol

Posted: at 16-07-2009 11:38 AM (14 years ago) | Hero
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- around_d_corner at 16-07-2009 11:51 AM (14 years ago)
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Quote from: esonu on 16-07-2009 11:38 AM
poster go and take malaria drugs lol
or beta  still he should go see his doc......
Posted: at 16-07-2009 11:51 AM (14 years ago) | Hero
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- esonu at 16-07-2009 11:53 AM (14 years ago)
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exactly

Posted: at 16-07-2009 11:53 AM (14 years ago) | Hero
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- mazi at 16-07-2009 12:03 PM (14 years ago)
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dis is more of hallucination than dream..
Posted: at 16-07-2009 12:03 PM (14 years ago) | Hero
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- around_d_corner at 16-07-2009 12:09 PM (14 years ago)
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Quote from: mazi on 16-07-2009 12:03 PM
dis is more of hallucination than dream..
hahahahahaaa yeye............
Posted: at 16-07-2009 12:09 PM (14 years ago) | Hero
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- oyez at 16-07-2009 12:25 PM (14 years ago)
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Joseph the Rhymer

Posted: at 16-07-2009 12:25 PM (14 years ago) | Gistmaniac
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- around_d_corner at 16-07-2009 01:44 PM (14 years ago)
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passin and dreamin
Posted: at 16-07-2009 01:44 PM (14 years ago) | Hero
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- Beauti4 at 16-07-2009 03:19 PM (14 years ago)
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Vam....thank u bt i no enjoy am.
Posted: at 16-07-2009 03:19 PM (14 years ago) | Hero
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- MrDon at 16-07-2009 03:23 PM (14 years ago)
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black dream is when light is gone but then u re a vampire
Posted: at 16-07-2009 03:23 PM (14 years ago) | Gistmaniac
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- Beauti4 at 16-07-2009 03:26 PM (14 years ago)
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i think your dream makes some sense sha....
Posted: at 16-07-2009 03:26 PM (14 years ago) | Hero
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- esonu at 16-07-2009 04:28 PM (14 years ago)
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joseph de dreamer

Posted: at 16-07-2009 04:28 PM (14 years ago) | Hero
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- around_d_corner at 16-07-2009 04:40 PM (14 years ago)
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Quote from: Beauti4 on 16-07-2009 03:26 PM
i think your dream makes some sense sha....
na lie no sense att all..........
Posted: at 16-07-2009 04:40 PM (14 years ago) | Hero
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- Beauti4 at 16-07-2009 04:46 PM (14 years ago)
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Quote from: around_d_corner on 16-07-2009 04:40 PM
Quote from: Beauti4 on 16-07-2009 03:26 PM
i think your dream makes some sense sha....
na lie no sense att all..........

write your own dream make i c
Posted: at 16-07-2009 04:46 PM (14 years ago) | Hero
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- around_d_corner at 16-07-2009 05:18 PM (14 years ago)
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Quote from: Beauti4 on 16-07-2009 04:46 PM
Quote from: around_d_corner on 16-07-2009 04:40 PM
Quote from: Beauti4 on 16-07-2009 03:26 PM
i think your dream makes some sense sha....
na lie no sense att all..........

write your own dream make i c
to to ma profile comment and see them...... and ve wrote them to u 4mer
Posted: at 16-07-2009 05:18 PM (14 years ago) | Hero
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- blackberryPearl at 17-07-2009 12:58 AM (14 years ago)
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u guys are all mean.
he is just dreaming
Posted: at 17-07-2009 12:58 AM (14 years ago) | Hero
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- McBona at 17-07-2009 04:46 AM (14 years ago)
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Joseph!  But not son of Jacob
Posted: at 17-07-2009 04:46 AM (14 years ago) | Gistmaniac
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