THE DAY MY TEACHER SLAPPED ME!

I made this poem up and its supposed to be a funny poem so plz don't be soo hard on it :S
 Anywayz...

 The day my teacher slapped me
 Was a very awful day,
 My class was doing nothing
 So i had to act that way

 The reason why she slapped me
 I will tell you thats for sure:
 I was so bored out of my guts
 That I just had to snore.

 But when she caught me snoring
 She just sparked beyond belief
 And then started towards me
 While I stared in horror and grief

 'Oh this is bad, very bad',
 I kept saying in my mind
 Wondering if this was a dream
 Of some very cruel kind

 At last she came beside me
 And stretched out her wrinkly hands
 Suddenly pain befell my cheeks
 Which stung like needles and sands

 Oh how I cried, oh how I cried,
 It was an awful way,
 And from that day a lesson was made
 Never to snore again!
     
   

Posted: at 30-08-2010 01:35 PM (13 years ago) | Upcoming

Good job, keep trying you'll come up with something interesting someday   

Posted: at 30-08-2010 01:55 PM (13 years ago) | Upcoming

THE DAY THE POSTER POST THIS POEM,
I WAS NOT EVEN AT THE FORUM,
I LATER SAW HER SNORE IN FUNNY HUB,
I HAVE TO SLAP HER CHEEKS..
INSTED OF HER CRYING,..SHE SHOUT!!!.....I AM BORN_TO_WIN


Nice one SENORITA...keep it up

Posted: at 31-08-2010 01:22 AM (13 years ago) | Gistmaniac

9ice try! But nor do wetin go make your teacher slap you again

Posted: at 31-08-2010 11:03 AM (13 years ago) | Hero

9ice slap

Posted: at 31-08-2010 07:50 PM (13 years ago) | Hero

hehehehehehehee......nice one @poster!

Posted: at 2-09-2010 10:27 AM (13 years ago) | Gistmaniac

this money man need to spread some money around

Posted: at 2-09-2010 11:14 AM (13 years ago) | Gistmaniac

 waz is the meaning or that thing,,,,sorry name  ((sooltb))

Posted: at 2-09-2010 11:25 AM (13 years ago) | Gistmaniac

good one I'm impressed. there's a lot of room for improvement and the  sky shall be your starting point

Posted: at 2-09-2010 01:25 PM (13 years ago) | Gistmaniac

na the slap dey encourage her

Posted: at 3-09-2010 03:23 AM (13 years ago) | Gistmaniac