"He slept with my wife and I retaliated, now I am HIV positive"

Date: 07-03-2011 8:33 am (13 years ago) | Author: Krix
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- at 7-03-2011 08:33 AM (13 years ago)
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It was 10 am in the morning, the children have gone to school and the street is almost empty. The rising sun is gently hitting the roof tops of the houses in a low cost housing estate somewhere in Abuja.

Mr. John Obi (one of the residents of the area) returns back home after he had left for his office earlier saying goodbye to his wife and children, but little did he know that he had forgotten a file containing his presentation at a conference in their office later in the day.

He goes straight to the main entrance and tries to reach for the door. As he touches the handle the door creaks and opens on its own accord. Surprised and in bedlam, he pushes the door wide open, walks in gently and shuts it behind him.

The living room is somewhat unkempt and the coffee mug with which he drank coffee the previous night is still on the centre table. He darts a glance at the TV which is also not turned off and listen attentively to an announcement on air. Coming back to himself he remembers why he came home. He dashes out of the living room into a lobby that connects the living room to the bedroom. As he gets closer to his bedroom door, he begins to hear the incessant grunts of a male and a female. He stops to think, "maybe the sound of coming from my head, oh! I work too much"

But as he approaches  the door, the sound gets louder. Without knocking he burst open the bedroom door. He's astounded by the sight of the two naked images of his wife and one of his most favourite neighbours (Mr. Femi Alawiye).

The story continues...

Posted: at 7-03-2011 08:33 AM (13 years ago) | Newbie
- xter at 7-03-2011 08:49 AM (13 years ago)
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Nollywood or npwood?



Wetin be dis?

Posted: at 7-03-2011 08:49 AM (13 years ago) | Addicted Hero
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- adams933 at 7-03-2011 09:00 AM (13 years ago)
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Lets get the concluding part na.
Posted: at 7-03-2011 09:00 AM (13 years ago) | Gistmaniac
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- Youngstoriez at 7-03-2011 09:17 AM (13 years ago)
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......yes, the concluding part!!!...kaii...need a divorce immediately, buh God forbid it in my own time oo..... i pray my wife wont do such to me....cant withstand the pain!!...its too bad!! Tell me folks...wat kind of marriage is that?Huh???....Is that the man never use to satisfy..his wife segxwally or what?Huh??? What cud possibly make women and men have sex with another outside....when they are married?Huh?Huh?Huh???...this world...na waoooo!!!
Posted: at 7-03-2011 09:17 AM (13 years ago) | Gistmaniac
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- Black-Krix at 7-03-2011 09:57 AM (13 years ago)
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Quote from: xter on  7-03-2011 08:49 AM
Nollywood or npwood?




Wetin be dis?

You be leftist? Why you no always dey get joy? Na wa for you oh! You are not obliged to read my post. You fit bone am or don't comment.
Posted: at 7-03-2011 09:57 AM (13 years ago) | Newbie
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- Peter_Ade at 7-03-2011 11:17 AM (13 years ago)
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koju maribi
Posted: at 7-03-2011 11:17 AM (13 years ago) | Gistmaniac
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- MissyBarbie at 7-03-2011 11:20 AM (13 years ago)
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hehehehehehehe.....Yawa don gas
Posted: at 7-03-2011 11:20 AM (13 years ago) | Hero
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- dirtykid at 13-03-2011 11:22 PM (13 years ago)
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This Movie will sell well well... Poster come and complete the script, I'm interested  Cheesy

Posted: at 13-03-2011 11:22 PM (13 years ago) | Hero
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- jossy4reall at 13-03-2011 11:46 PM (13 years ago)
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Y u dey divide dis interesting film into part 1 n 2 wey it suppose to b only part 1 n in a cd plate.
Anyway am wetin 4 part 2 shaa

Posted: at 13-03-2011 11:46 PM (13 years ago) | Hero
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- dirtykid at 14-03-2011 01:29 AM (13 years ago)
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 Grin Grin

Posted: at 14-03-2011 01:29 AM (13 years ago) | Hero
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- D4rk-Cuti3 at 14-03-2011 01:32 AM (13 years ago)
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hmmm nollywood story
Posted: at 14-03-2011 01:32 AM (13 years ago) | Upcoming
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- Youngstoriez at 14-03-2011 01:32 AM (13 years ago)
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Quote from: dirtykid on 13-03-2011 11:22 PM
This Movie will sell well well... Poster come and complete the script, I'm interested  Cheesy
....lol
Posted: at 14-03-2011 01:32 AM (13 years ago) | Gistmaniac
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- xena15 at 14-03-2011 10:41 AM (13 years ago)
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Quote from: xter on  7-03-2011 08:49 AM
Nollywood or npwood?



Wetin be dis?
where d HIV part na?
Abi na 4 Part 2?

Posted: at 14-03-2011 10:41 AM (13 years ago) | Gistmaniac
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- blessedme at 14-03-2011 11:12 AM (13 years ago)
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waiting for the concluding part
Posted: at 14-03-2011 11:12 AM (13 years ago) | Hero
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- pholake at 14-03-2011 11:18 AM (13 years ago)
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 Lips Sealed
Posted: at 14-03-2011 11:18 AM (13 years ago) | Gistmaniac
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- Black-Krix at 5-04-2011 11:39 AM (13 years ago)
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A state of Hugger-mugger is the perfect description of the scenario as Mr. Alawiye jumps up to his feet stake naked, still on Mr. Obi's bed, he tries to say a word but finds no sound. He can't look at Obi in the eye, as he bows down his head to sober, he saw his penis shrinking back to its original state. It was then he came back to his senses again that he was naked on another man's bed. Quickly, he steps out of the bed, picking up his clothes from different directions. He puts his shows under his left armpit, his shirt on his head, hopping out of the room to the lobby still trying to wear his pants.

Jane, John Obi's, without remorse confidently gets up from the bed, stares at her husband in the eyes and ask "What? why are you acting as if you just saw a ghost?". She hisses, picks her pants from the bed, without bothering to wear it, she turns to the bedroom toilet's door swinging the pants in her hand, whistling a love song from Boyz II Men as she slams the bathroom door behind her.
 
Mr. John Obi, stunned and cold, he can't make a sound, he can't move, he just slumps to the ground with his hands on the back of his head as tears rolls down his cheeks. He can hear his wife putting on the shower as she continues to whistle. He stands up to his feet and walks towards the bathroom door. "why did you do that Jane?" he asks. Jane is not talking, she keeps on whistling. "I am talking to you Jane, why did you do it?". Jane won't say a word, she is still whistling. Mr. Obi, now very angry, walks into his wardrobe, brings out a double barrel riffle and a packet of bullets. He breaks the barrel open and loads two cartridges into the bullet chamber and walks out of the bedroom into the lobby. He stops to think for a while, turns back to look at his bedroom direction, then wipes the tears off his face, sighs and now determined, he walks into the living room and out of the front door.

"Alawiye deserves to die" he said to himself. "I can't live with this, someone must pay for this". He goes to his car, opens the door tossed the barrel on the passenger's seat, he sits in front of the wheel and put the car engine to a start. He raises the accelerator as the car hums loudly, engaging the gear; he zooms out of the compound.

Mr. Alawiye's house is a duplex, with a very big lawn with some beautiful flowers around the patio. Mr. Obi's car zooms into the compound after clearance from the gateman. He parks his car right in front of the front door. He opens the door and gets off the car, walking around the car from the back to the passenger's side, he opens the door and brings out his double barrel riffle and walks straight to the front door. The living room is somewhat luxurious, the chairs are covered with animal skin leather velvet and the light from the 50 inches Samsung LED TV is giving the living room and extra-ordinary color.

Mr. Obi heads straight to the stairs case and climbs upstairs into a very big lobby, he looks around the three doors and tries to figure out which one is Alawiye's room. He decides to break into all three one after the other. but as he burst opens the first door with the gun in his hand pointed froward, he comes face to face with Mrs. Alawiye who just came out of their master's bedrooms toilet, with only a towel tied around her Bosom . As she sees Mr. Obi with a gun she is shocked and stricken with fear. She raises her hands up to show that she's armless, and by so doing, the towel knob under her armpit got loosen and she becomes stark naked as the towel has fallen down from her Bosom  revealing her naked and very inviting body.

"Where is your husband?" He asked scrutinizing her body as his eyes tilts on her up and down. "He's..." stammers Mrs. Alawiye. Mr. Obi shouts at her to keep quiet, and because he is getting so uncomfortable with her nakedness, he asks her to turn around. She turns around and as she bends down to pick up the towel. Mr. Obi could see all her engine room from her back side. The gun fell from his hands with a loud sound as a shot went off as his arms and elbow become weak to hold on due to what he has seen.  Mrs. Alawiye screamed and Mr. Obi rushes to her to hold her in consolation. But as his hands starts touching her naked body, shoulder and Bosom , his J.T. becomes turgid and he rushes her to the bed. Without any resistance, Mrs. Alawiye responds with a deep French kiss, smooching him all over.

The whole house is
Posted: at 5-04-2011 11:39 AM (13 years ago) | Newbie
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- solid_solid at 5-04-2011 03:11 PM (13 years ago)
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na the part 2 be this?
Posted: at 5-04-2011 03:11 PM (13 years ago) | Gistmaniac
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- livingday at 5-04-2011 03:19 PM (13 years ago)
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Quote from: xter on  7-03-2011 08:49 AM
Nollywood or npwood?



Wetin be dis?

Another figment of a man's imagination>
Posted: at 5-04-2011 03:19 PM (13 years ago) | Gistmaniac
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- sobeit at 5-04-2011 03:25 PM (13 years ago)
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Quote from: solid_solid on  5-04-2011 03:11 PM
na the part 2 be this?

i think so,the dude dey try
Posted: at 5-04-2011 03:25 PM (13 years ago) | Gistmaniac
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- Atunjel at 5-04-2011 04:02 PM (13 years ago)
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abeg ds kin novel fit corrupt us 4 here abeg tag it 18+
Posted: at 5-04-2011 04:02 PM (13 years ago) | Newbie
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