here i stand ...here i am

That was brilliant! Something about it... don't know what exactly, but it evokes feeling, deep emotion. Somewhat lonely... anyway, you are a great writer! Keep it up...

Posted: at 25-10-2008 06:49 AM (16 years ago) | Upcoming

Here you and I stand,
Until the time,
Was it a crime to see what cannot be touched,
Hear voices speak words that can't be undone,
Was it our fault we were invincible
To the naked eye, we are invisible
we cannot be seen,
Because no one wants to see us
we are different,
Different from the rest of them,
So they ignore us
But we don't ignore them
No one is friendly
Why were they so blind
Because we are not them
we are only our"s
we are different
But we can see
But they can't see us
we watch them fall
Divided they fall
Together they die
But here we stand
Until the end of time.
Was it a crime that we were unique
Original to the human mind
we were invisible to there standards
Invisible to their lies
But as they kneel to beg
we watch them beg
But here we stand until the end of time
Was it a crime for us to live our life
A crime for wanting to survive
No one would answer
So we will wait until the end of time
 
 

Posted: at 25-10-2008 07:04 AM (16 years ago) | Newbie

i stands btw d lines,,,

Posted: at 12-04-2016 03:53 PM (9 years ago) | Hero