True love is..... when u laugh when he's around and cry when he's gone when he's ur last thought before u sleep and ur first thought when u r awake when his name is ur constant freudian slip, so much so that u gave up trying 2 explain y? the sun rises with his smile and sets in his eyes when excitement, joy, ecstacy, pleasure are all understatements 4 what u feel when u r with him when leaving him, even 4 a second, feels like a physical pain in ur chest when the words "I LOVE U" is not enough but u just keep saying it until the day when all the love you have 4 him has been expressed in words.
Posted: at 19-11-2009 04:47 PM (15 years ago) | Newbie
blings_is_back at 20-11-2009 01:15 PM (15 years ago) (m)
Quote from: lovely1234 on 19-11-2009 04:47 PM
True love is..... when u laugh when he's around and cry when he's gone when he's ur last thought before u sleep and ur first thought when u r awake when his name is ur constant freudian slip, so much so that u gave up trying 2 explain y? the sun rises with his smile and sets in his eyes when excitement, joy, ecstacy, pleasure are all understatements 4 what u feel when u r with him when leaving him, even 4 a second, feels like a physical pain in ur chest when the words "I LOVE U" is not enough but u just keep saying it until the day when all the love you have 4 him has been expressed in words.
na poem be dis one abi na wetin
Posted: at 20-11-2009 01:15 PM (15 years ago) | Hero
lovely1234 at 20-11-2009 10:14 PM (15 years ago) (f)
i was expressing feelings in words since i was confused...also its freestyle poetry.....it jus came to me...i want honest critism on whether its good or not
Posted: at 20-11-2009 10:14 PM (15 years ago) | Newbie
ceejay58 at 20-11-2009 11:18 PM (15 years ago) (m)
Quote from: lovely1234 on 20-11-2009 10:14 PM
i was expressing feelings in words since i was confused...also its freestyle poetry.....it jus came to me...i want honest critism on whether its good or not
so re those feelings 4 me?....
Posted: at 20-11-2009 11:18 PM (15 years ago) | Hero
i was expressing feelings in words since i was confused...also its freestyle poetry.....it jus came to me...i want honest critism on whether its good or not
You are right Baby, well done for that thought of u'rs; but unfortunately those words u have just expressed are not more in existence and are hardly found among lovers of nowadays
Loving, humble and humorous to sane & reasonable people
Posted: at 20-11-2009 11:31 PM (15 years ago) | Gistmaniac
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